2012년 5월 15일 화요일

A slave of drink(20120100 Hye-rim Eom)

 Have you ever experienced blacking out? we drink so much for many reasons.
 First, when we upset, we can drink so much in order to forget annoying things. Especially, we drink when we break up with our lover...T^T
 On the contrary, we can drinks so much because we are so fun! If we love atmosphere over the bowl, we drink influenced by the atmosphere. I belong to this type. I'm a social drinker. haha~
 Another reason is a penalty. In blind date, we usually play a game that If you aren't good at playing a game, you have to drink as a penalty. If you lose a game again and again, you can't help drink so much.
But a excessive drinking makes many negative effects.
 First, you could cause many serious diseases. liver cancer is one of representative diseases.
 Second, you could commit big mistakes. When you drinks so much, you are dull. So you might talk rudely, and offend other people.
 Third, you might be harmed easily by criminals.
Eventually, It is best to drink moderately. Don't be a drunken bum!!!

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  1. You have done many things well in this composition. Your title is great (but capitalize important words), your hook is good, and you give both causes and effects. You also have clearly given a suggestion for your conclusion! This would be a great topic to develop for your final essay.

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